This one is really a role model for a glamour shot. But I have some complaints to make, maybe because that type of portraits doesn't fit my taste very well.
First of all is the editing. It is nicely done, but taken to the point that it's too obvious. I mean, everybody does some retouching and everybody else knows about it too. Still, it disturbs me how much she is shining and her skin lacks the natural skin texture.
The lighting is okay. Perhaps a little too bright, but not enough to be a subject to criticize.
Last thing is the background. That's most likely just me, but it's somewhat distracting. A smooth, one-coloured background would have drawn completely all of my attention to the model.
So many negative words, but don't get me wrong. This is undoubtedly a high quality photo.
yeah the background is a bit loud for this shot but that is what I had to work with at this on the fly shoot. I am not discouraged in anyway about what you think might be negative words. they are all constructive for me and I do apply what people tell me to try to fix/better my work overall.
Thank you for the indepth crit.
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First of all is the editing. It is nicely done, but taken to the point that it's too obvious. I mean, everybody does some retouching and everybody else knows about it too. Still, it disturbs me how much she is shining and her skin lacks the natural skin texture.
The lighting is okay. Perhaps a little too bright, but not enough to be a subject to criticize.
Last thing is the background. That's most likely just me, but it's somewhat distracting. A smooth, one-coloured background would have drawn completely all of my attention to the model.
So many negative words, but don't get me wrong. This is undoubtedly a high quality photo.
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Thank you for the indepth crit.
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